Before And After Drawings

I tried to get in onto the before and after meme template, but decided it was more trouble than it was worth, so I settled with this.

FYI, the before picture was submitted on my other account, but it's in storage now. The after one is submitted into my gallery on this account.

I hope I'm not the only one that can see the improvement. Or read my writing(Just kidding, by the way).
Feedback is greatly appreciated. Now enjoy.

Hetalia, America/Alfred F. Jone (c) Hidekaz Himaruya